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Re: Soul (A simple poem)
Hey, thanks for ze critiquez! ;-) yeah, thats the cool thing about short poems, you don't have to worry about boring anyone. Plus, short can be more powerful. I wrote ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: The Elevator Man
Don't really have time at the moment for a review of considerable length... but I thought I would say "nice job!" because the prose is so well-written, and the story ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: Stranger Nights Than These
Nice! ;-) Its a simple poem, but a beautiful one, and (thank goodness) free from annoying grammatical errors and such. Very well done! -Realms. (P.S. The only i would change ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Soul (A simple poem)
I liked it. It wasn't overly pretenious, it had a kind of wisdom in its simplicity. Carried still a lot of though in its brevity, and I thought it was ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: How to Live
Search for the mysteries Inside all of us Search for the feelings That make us create That make our souls strong Seek out the stars Journey down that broken path ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Soul (A simple poem)
Wesley lives inside of you That little hippie boy His feet are numb His eyes are blue That dirty little boy So if you ever get the time To give ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: excited for "Where The Wild Things Are?" anyone else?!
I'v the read the book and, recently, saw the movie, and... (for ounce) I actually think the movie was better. I mean, seriously! :D The movie was totally expanded! They ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Tender Mourning
The grass leaks With emerald-green light Which I savour tenderly In my melting brown eyes The sun cries For all its lost, For all its mourned, In its crooked light ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: Words of a Conceited Man
Words of a Conceited Man Why, hello, dear gents and ladies, Have you a second to spare? Then come here and look – This is my work of art. Go ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: Car Hugs
Greetings, this is Mr. Realms, reviewing your excellant piece, "Car Hugs,". Really, honestly, I'm stumped as to what I shoud critisize. If there are flaws, I didn't notice them. Its ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: insert coin
You get another pet elephant. :elephant: Keep collecting them, and someday, you can take over the world. lol *Fumbles through contents of pocket, can't find anything. D*mn, I mutter. Have ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
10/10 XD Seriously I love Johnney Depp 8) And Tim Burton :twisted: And creepy gothic movies in general... :mrgreen: So your avvy just hit me as the coolest ever! :smt005 ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Bubbling, chapter 1
Greetings to you, my fine-feathered friend, I will be reviewing your piece, “Bubbling,” today, and, hopefully, reviewing it well. So without further adieu…. Overall, I enjoyed what you wrote, bu
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: drunk driver's persepective.
This is really... amazing! The emotions are strong and realistic... you really did a good job potraying how a drunk driver would really feel... Wow... this is good. I'm very ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: Rejection
I don't think you should change anything, this has depthe ! You know, simple as it is, you can really feel the emotion in this piece, and it makes a ...
Jul 25, 2009
